I've seen many dark clouds
spreading the sky when
the sun violates the earth...
but never....
as dissapointing as you...
A breathless rock I am..
wounded by fearsome storms and waves..
screeched by time...
left with cracks of your memory..
but...
the waiting never ends..
as your hope
is the only fuel that makes
me remember
that I'm alive....
13 comments:
quite a poetic guy huh?
nah..
am nothin like that..
am just tryin out somethin new..
tat i had never done before
;)
anyway, it was really sweet :)
im waiting too....
actually
everybody are in some kind of
'waiting' in their life..
wow...nice da... keep on good work..
thanks akka ;)
wow a nice poem in simple english
gud keep it up ....
;) thanks...
welcome to my blog
Very nice poem,keep writing my dude
thanks Suresh anna ,
for your encouragement..
definitely going to do tat....
juz too busy occupied by exams..
anyway ur blog is very very intresting...
what else should i comment here...
ur poem really sweet n nice...
i just couldnt find the rite word for it...
i wonder what it means...
i feel it for a moment in time the poem so touching...
look i dun know what am i talking about here...
i told u before...
the waiting never ends..
as your hope is the only fuel that make some remember that I'm alive..
real fact..
nice lines..
don stop your writing..
vaanga.. tamil virumbi...
romba kastappattu try panren...
i will definitely continue ..
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